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Some people hate it, including me, and some people could care less.

BUT NOBODY LIKES IT.

“We see” is weak because it’s a given. Of course we see it. What’s our other choice?

“We see Kate on her knees in the flowerbed.” is ten times less interesting to read than “Kate yanks weeds like an avenging angel.”

“We see” is a passive choice. Many other choices are better.