How to dialogue. In a spec, this exchange would be a page and a half long, with Mal and Jayne stating many facts at each other. This is what direct conflict looks like. And it’s funny, too.

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cthonical: gallifrey-feels: Fanfic authors: READ THE WHOLE FUCKING PAGE THIS IS ONE OF THE MOST IMPORTANT AND VALUABLE LESSONS YOU CAN LEARN AS A WRITER. I SAY THIS AS A READER AND A PROFESSIONAL GENRE EDITOR. I don’t just make this stuff up for my own amusement.

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Notes from a Screenreader: Right Hook

nywift: Photo via Go Into the Story. A spec script with a real hook jumps right out of the pile. It’s the difference between an indestructible cyborg from the future relentlessly attempting to murder Sarah Connor and Sarah Connor, for instance, getting a message from the future that she should start taking self-defense classes while…

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allfonsocuaron: (2/?) Favourite Directors→ David Fincher “Filmmaking isn’t if you can just strap on a camera onto an actor, and steadicam, and point it at their face, and follow them through the movie, that is not what moviemaking is, that is not what it’s about. It’s not just about getting a performance. It’s also about the…

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USEFUL CONFESSIONS #7

Subtext and misdirection will magically appear in your first draft when you change your mind about your plot halfway through. Exploit the crap out of them.

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