A FRESH VOICE

If you boil down what makes a script readable, you get one adjective: fresh. It is impossible to overstate that most scripts are like most other scripts, because most writers write what they’ve already seen in exactly the way that they’ve seen it. Stretch yourself as a writer. Be personal. There is an undiscovered country…

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Useful Confessions #2

I endlessly rewrite as I write. As in, read the whole thing three times, write a little, reread, go back, read, rewrite, reread the whole thing, write a little. It takes me as long to write one draft as it takes other people to write three or four or nine. It does come out highly…

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If you find that a point cannot be made without narration, it is virtually certain that the point is unimportant to the story … The audience requires not information but drama. David Mamet (On Directing Film) True fact. You can get by on a hell of a lot less information than you think you can….

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This is how a visual piece of emotional action happens in a script. There are some words, but the characters and their emotions are not expressed in conversation. Something huge happens, and it’s something we watch, rather than listen to. Little Miss Sunshine was written by Michael Arndt.

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5 STAR ESCALATION

Escalation keeps the story interesting. To succeed, an individual escalation should be well set-up as the thing we hope doesn’t ever happen. Then when it happens, we know the most shit has just hit the biggest fan. Rinse, then repeat until the end of act two.

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