An Escalation You Can Use: She was Acting

Take a trope character. We’ll use The Distraught Mother for this example. She will weep, insist, fall to pieces. You see a distraught mother, a primal instinct takes over, nothing is important anymore except fixing this problem immediately. Coincidentally, people who get what they want by means of manipulation know this. So do screenwriters. Trope…

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HOW TO CONFLICT

Never AND. Always OR. Real dramatic conflict gives the protag a choice. This OR That. Success OR Failure. Save the mother OR the child. Capitulate to the antagonist OR get shot. Conflict that has a lot of options is not real conflict. The protagonist is free to save the mother AND the child only after…

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tribecafilm: 3 Reasons Why Richard Linklater is the Smartest Person in Hollywood 

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fuckyeahdirectors: Kelly Reichardt on set of Meek’s Cutoff. 

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LET’S TALK ABOUT OTHER KINDS OF STRUCTURE

There are some. I leave it to Linda Aronson to explain how they work, because I can’t fit it in a gif. Except this one. And I get really down on writers starting out with big ambitions about complicated structure because, frankly, it’s hard enough to do one protagonist and one linear storyline to good…

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REVERSE ENGINEER YOUR REWRITE

Aliens is such a fantastic example of this, you should just watch it five times in a row so you can catch all the little setups and how they are accomplished. Nothing is wasted. Everything does double duty. The power loader is the ultimate in reverse engineered awesomeness, of course, it pays off in well-established…

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EVERYONE KNOWS IT’S WISH FULFILLMENT

I don’t want to embarrass anyone, but It has to be said. Some scripts reek of “Superhero Me”. Not that the protag has super powers, but they’re quick with a comeback, they don’t make mistakes and improbably attractive people hit on them a lot. It’s not dramatic. They have to get knocked all the way…

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You know, you never hear gay guys bitching about their boyfriends not being virgins when they met them.

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jackieinspired: Yeah, a fullmetal heart Your screenplay in a nutshell.

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