I got some good notes on a TV Pilot that I just wrote. The theme of the notes was to be more creative (and interesting) when translating from the outline to the draft. My current draft hits a lot of the ideas in the most straightforward way. I need to work on not only hitting the beat, but also revealing character at the same time. This is something that I know intellectually, but it is a good reminder to do it in practice. When there is a time crunch to get something done, it is hard to keep all the balls in the air. I’m glad that I have another chance to go at it and make it better.
Also, I’ve got a couple of small characters who are not well defined. Some don’t even have names. I need to get a better grasp on their motivations and personality to make them as real as the main characters.